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Students’ Identity | Writer | Editor |
Name | Verdy Adriansyah Hidayat | Alfhan Masarof |
Study Program | Civil Engineering | Civil Engineering |
Title of Manuscript | Hardness and Quality Test Methods on Iron and Steel |
C=Competence : NC= Non Competence |
No | Editorial Findings | Number | Key Word | C | NC |
A | Mechanical Editing |
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| | 4 | wich causes disability or failure in structural forensics are humans (A. SENTENCE BUILDING 5W 1H number 2 (answer)) you can get Constant speed can be obtained when reaching a fixed speed (A. SENTENCE BUILDING 5W 1H number 5 (answer)) where to permanently attach magnet? (A. SENTENCE BUILDING 5W 1H number 6 (question)) permanent magnet installation is carried out in (A. SENTENCE BUILDING 5W 1H number 6 (answer))
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| | 4 | structural forensics tensile test silicon nitride impact body
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| | 5 | these defects can be caused by several factors including human resources, facilities, and infrastructure that is less supportive, or materials that are not by the design. (paragraph 1) destructive test (DT) is a metal testing process that can cause damage to the metal being tested. (paragraph 2) non destructive test (NDT) is a metal testing process that cannot cause damage to the metal or object being tested (paragraph 3) this matter is achieved by permananently attaching a magnet to a moving impact body through the coil in the collision device and electic voltage on both movements of both bounce and impact during the test. (paragraph 9) the quotient is measured by the value of the stress originating from the collision and the rebound velocity multiplied by a factor of 1000 to produce a numbers which is the leeb hardness value. (paragraph 9)
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| | 4 | In structural forensics there will be defects or failures are often found in the test object material (paragraph 1)  Especially if will the material to be tested is part of an existing structure or existing condition. (paragraph 5)  In general, the testing process on metal materials can be grouped into three groups of test methods, namely: (paragraph 1)  The demand for practicality regarding the properties and strength of steel also increases with the development of technology. So in this case, trial research was conducted on steel using 3 (three) tools, namely: (paragraph 6)
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| | 2 | These defects can be caused by several factors including human resources, facilities, and infrastructure that is less supportive, or materials that are not by the design. (paragraph 1)   Metallography, namely the process of examining metals about their chemical composition, the elements contained in them, and the shape of their structure. (paragraph 4) 
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| | 2 | In general, the testing process on metal materials can be grouped into three groups of test methods, namely: (paragraph 1) The demand for practicality regarding the properties and strength of steel also increases with the development of technology. So in this case, trial research was conducted on steel using 3 (three) tools, namely: (paragraph 6)
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| | 12 | and, or, to be, to, in, is, which, of, be, are, also, by.
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| | 4 | The quotient is measured by the value of the stress originating from the collision and the rebound velocity multiplied by a factor of 1000 to produce a numbers which is the Leeb hardness value. (paragraph 9)  One of them is in the fielded of structural forensics. In structural forensics, defects or failures are often found in the test object material (verbal sentences number 4)  We are testing the equipment to ensure compliance with this test method (nominal sentences number 10) The rebound velocity multiplied by a factor of 1000 to produce a numbers which is are the Leeb
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B | Substantive Editing |
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| The contents of this article were obtained from an article on Google with the title "hardness and quality test methods on iron and steel", an article written by Dr. Eng Ming Narto Wijaya ST., MT., M.Sc., and Ir. Siti Nurlina MT, IPP taken from the website: sipil.ub.ac.id and rewritten, looking for 5w 1h, verbal, nominal, and present tense, and translated by Verdy Adriansyah Hidayat. |
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| This article uses 2 languages, namely English and Indonesian, and both use formal language from beginning to the end. |
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| The author describes the hardness and quality test methods on iron and steel in civil engineering. |
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| This article is intended for the public to know the quality of iron and steel, which must be tested for hardness first. |
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| This data is reinforced from an article entitled “Hardness and Quality Test Methods on Iron and Steel” on the website sipil.ub.ac.id |
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Verbal Verification:
In my opinion, in this manuscript, it is necessary to add pictures of hardness and quality testing tools on iron and steel so that readers know about these tools.
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Editorial Judgment
In my opinion, this manuscript should be corrected because many errors were found, namely, punctuation errors, incorrect writing, writing that is too long even though if it is shortened it still has the same meaning, and incomplete answers in section 5w 1h.
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